https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1UpbNqNFVp1vlg7eDZAMbZR_I9IYVWSDJaCn20nme91o/edit
Here is the link to this week's google form. I am curious to hear how your peer review went! If you are not attending class, I suggest you find someone from the class you can share your work with. This is one of the most valuable parts of this class.
Remember to keep your feedback simple and ask questions rather than give orders. Do not take corrections or suggestions personally. Say "Thank you for your feedback." no matter what!
SPELLING ERROR, UNDERLINE THE WORD
WRONG WORD, CIRCLE THE WORD
AWKWARD PHRASE, WEIRD WORD ORDER, UNDERLINE WITH A SQUIGGLE
CORRECT WORD OR WORDS BUT REPEATED (FOR EXAMPLE), UNDERLINE WITH A SQUIGGLE
When you move on to the content of the essay, ask thoughtful questions. Don't forget to make positive comments, too!
CAN YOU CLARIFY THIS?
DO YOU MEAN TO SAY...?
GOOD POINT!
INTERESTING!
HOW CAN YOU SHOW THIS RATHER THAN TELL?
CAN THIS SENTENCE BE MORE DIRECT? SIMPLIFIED?
etc.
PLEASE REVISE AND SUBMIT ESSAY 1 TO KAROLINE BY OCTOBER 28, 2022